Whoah! Not sure what happened there… I stumbled across the Helium web site earlier – a site I hadn’t visited for a long time – and before I knew it, I’d submitted a three page discourse on how to edit a more compelling film.
Heaven knows what came over me! Still, it was an enjoyable process. I figured I do it to try to corral my thoughts on what I’d learnt from editing Greetings. It didn’t quite turn out that way, but I was quite pleased with the results. You can read it here…
One thing that is slightly annoying it that it’s corrupted some of the formatting, so if you read a sentence and it doesn’t make sense, try throwing a hyphen or ellipsis in there.
Feel free to rip it to pieces…