I’ve finally got the rough edit into a shape that I’m happy to start getting feedback from. I’ve cut it down to 13 minutes 30, which is more or less exactly what I was aiming for. Adding some music to various sections has helped immensely as well, a little bit of Mozart and Einaudi go a long way. Of course, soon it will all be Miller, which should be fab.
Now the fun begins! I’ll just dig out my coat of very thick skin and WWII metal helmet. Let’s see how well I can take criticism…